Chapter 1

Okay this is the first part of the first chapter of the book i'm writing in my spare time (as I have soo damn much spare time lately!)

So tell me what you think!

It was a beautiful day in Caravela, a small town on the coast of England; the wind was gently threading itself through the trees on the cliffside tempting each leaf to do its own small dance. In the long grass Lloyd lay hand in hand with Jeane looking up at the few whiffs of cloud that were silently rolling across the sky, Jeane’s long brown hair making a chestnut aura around her head. The only sound they could hear was the gentle lapping of the sea against the stones on the beach below and the rustling of the bushes dancing in the wind.
Lloyd sat up with a start, releasing Jeane’s hand so he could lever himself up and sat staring at the sea. “Is it okay?” Jeane asked turning to face her boyfriend. Without breaking his stare, like he was listening intently to something, Lloyd replied with a slow nod. “Just saying that there’s good surf tomorrow if you wanna practice again?” He turned to look at Jeane with a smile, his green eyes looking deep into hers.
“Yeah, that sounds fun.”
“How is she today?” Lloyd asked breaking his stare with Jeane to gesture towards the sky with his eyes. After a few seconds silence Jeane laid back down in the long grass, let out a small breath and with a grin replied, “She’s fine, just playing through the trees.”